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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11353
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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As the development of modern technology,Smartphone has become quite popular all over the world with its outstanding functions.People can use phones to surf the Internet,update their personal micro blog,and upload their latest pictures at any place,anytime.It seems that smart phones have already become an indispensable part in people's daily lives.However,some people are indulging in smart phones,which already have side-effect on their normal life. Some people,especially teenagers,are easily fall for Smartphone for these reasons.First of all,nowadays,people are under great pressure,while cell phone provides a platform for people to relax themselves.By playing mini-games,vocal chatting with friends,watching movies and listening to music,people can easily forget their problems temporary.Second,there are always something new on the phone.It is can be interesting,mysterious and various.So people are eager to turn on their phones,want to know what is happening around them.When people spend too much time on the phones,they don't have enough chance to communicate with their friends or parents.Their attentions have been drawn away by the virtual world.Lack of good self-control,they are fragile to the smart phone addiction,while they supposed to focus on their study and work. I think people should take smart phone addiction seriously.Quitting addiction needs time and patience.People should turn off their phones,go outside and communicate with others face to face.Do more exercise and form optimistic attitude towards life!

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