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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11290
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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With the development of internet and technology,more and more people have their own smartphones,which are becoming more and more a part of people's live.Such as shopping,eating,playing,and communicating.To be honest,smartphone make more convenient for our live. However,on the other hand,smartphone is also make our life many issues,the same as health,relationship,playing and so on.People are crossing the street looking at their smartphone and using walking sticks in order to see,it's usually easy to have a car accident,and then because of cellphone's convenience,people face to face communicate becoming more less.Besides,cellphone games are popularity of people,people becoming more and more less to sport,so people are having problems with their health. It is we all know that technology is a double-edges sword,so is smartphone,playing smartphone stop where is should stop.

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