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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11290
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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As we can see from the picture that many people are overusing cell phones even when crossing a busy street they are still using their cell phones and sticks are replaced their eyes to lead their ways.This phenomenon reveals that people are increasingly dependent on cell phones .We are supposed to see that where there is a human ,there is a cell phone. While these radiations can make our bodies in poor condition.For example,a newly-born baby may be abnormal for being exposed to cell phones for a long tome.In the other hand,cell phones can easily draw people' attention while they are occupied with their work.It is not strange to hear a piece of news that a driver's using a cell phone resulted in a terrible accident.In addition ,people communicate less and less face to face.Some people even don't feel like talking with a human but hold their cell phones all the time and fix their eyes on them. In conclusion, while mobile phones have contributed a lot to making our life more convenient, we should use them appropriately and rationally.

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