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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:8887
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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I compeltely agree this remark.It often hits me that life is so long that i will feel nothing if i don't make fully use of time to do more significant things. Why i think so? On one hand,some significant things outlast life's length.It is ofen the case that if i spend many times to help the homeless,i will feel happy and it's significance outlasting life's value. On the other hand,what i do will changge somebody or something ,which is honorable for me . So what should i do ? Primarily,tireat my parents with pacience ,such as traveling with them ,making meals for them,caring for them and so on. Maybe the time that my parents accompany me is less and less.What's more,do utmost to help those in need around me.For exampie,i can help my roommates solve problems care for their psychology healths.Last but not least,read more books,travel more countries and try to improve myself.I think i don't get struggled in a boring job and i should do more signicant things not to disappoint myself beacuse i only live once. In a nutshell,it is doing sidnificant things that can make lie more significanct and valuable . It's up to different expectations.Only i do,what i expect outlast life' length.

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