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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦14:对自己影响至深的人

发布时间:2014-07-03 17:55浏览次数:436
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根据中文大意和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
每个人在自己的生活中都会遇到一个对自己影响至深的人,如:家人、老师、同学、朋友……
现在,某英文报纸正在开展题为“The important person in my life” 的征文活动。请你投稿,稿件内容包括:你生活中最重要的那个人是谁?描述一件发生在你们之间的事儿, 并谈谈你的感受。
提示词语:important person, remember, help, wonderful, think
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To mention the woman I admire most that is the famous American female writer, educator, philanthropist and social activist, Helen Keller. She suffered from acute tomach and brain congestion and lost her life. Her partents never disciplined her because pf her illness, even if shi made mistakes. Then one day a teacher named Annie Sullivan came along and changed Helen. The teacher helped Helen learn about learn about words.Helen was a bright child child and soon she learned to spell her first word. And she wrote Theer Days To See. When she was older, she went to college. Helen was very famous. She helped many blind and deaf people. She traveled around the world and helped many people. The world remembers her today as a brave and wonderful person. Shen was blind and deaf, but she found a way to see and hear.

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