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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17420
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

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With the development of the technology that our lifestyle has changed a lot.For an instance,computer which brought a lot benefits as well as depressive inspection to our life. First of all,what changed mostly in our general life is that online payment.people just choose the goods and pay for it on line by the computer,and they can receive it several days later.In this way,online payment not only save the time but improve the efficiency of shopping,Secondly,computer can help us learn the world better by using it to study foreign languages.Finally,this great technology has expanded our freiend cycle when we use it communicate with others.However,there stlii exist some disadvantages towards the computer which includes some teenagers would be addicted to playing the computer games so that it's harmful to their healthy.On the outher hand,sometimes it is not secure that our private information may be expose to outhers. All in all,nowadays computer is related our life in everywhere,but just only use the computer in a right way can we truly make our society more preperous!

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