题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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It is widely believed that trust is one of the important virtue of Chinese nation.Trust is so crucial that we can find it everywhere in our daily life.A world without trust is too difficult for us to image.In order to maintain a good rule of our society ,we should keep the word 'trust' in our mind .