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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4567
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分59.0分
评语:

行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;请作者提高词汇表达丰富度,另外请加强单词拼写的检查。

用户练习作文:

nowadays, internet is here and there and it seems that no one can live without internet.whether our work or our life are depended on internet a lot .and we can easly find the inpact of internet on interpersonal communication. on the one hand,internet change the way to contact another person.we used to write letters or give a call to keep contact with friendes far away.on internet ,we can write e-mails or talk in videos which make it much easier and more convenient. one the other hand,some people are addictied to the internet communication, and begin to eascap from the communication of face to face. to conclued,the impact of the internet on interpersonal communication is iniviterble

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