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nowadays, internet is here and there and it seems that no one can live without internet.whether our work or our life are depended on internet a lot .and we can easly find the inpact of internet on interpersonal communication. on the one hand,internet change the way to contact another person.we used to write letters or give a call to keep contact with friendes far away.on internet ,we can write e-mails or talk in videos which make it much easier and more convenient. one the other hand,some people are addictied to the internet communication, and begin to eascap from the communication of face to face. to conclued,the impact of the internet on interpersonal communication is iniviterble
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