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2003年专业四级英语作文真题:保持好心情

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:19浏览次数:3969
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题目 The importance of keeping a good mood.
说明 People in modern society live under a lot of pressure, from education, career, or family. So it is important for them to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances. Write on ANSWER SHEET ONE a composition of about 150 words on the following topic: The importance of keeping a good mood.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
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A good mood is an indispensible thing in our lives.Without it, we will lost impetus to pursue everything in life.We evetually perish without exception provided always suffering from pressure and pain. The despression patients are the best example.The grief and misery destorys their mind and willpower,demolishes their yearning to keep alive,consequently and sadly , many of them will suicide to end their endless sorrow.Seems without a good mood,life also lose its splender and lustre. However,if you keep a good mood,you will be optimistic and energetic to head-on every new day and uncountable troubles.A good mood is a dose of the best medicine to stay healthy for free yourself from great pressure. It is like an intimate friend to support you all the time,and I always believe that all the pain exists for foiling a good mood.Therefore,we should not make our suffering become senseless but pave the way to happiness.

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