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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第48篇:是否是只有你赢得了比赛才说明参与运动是有价值的

发布时间:2013-08-19 16:54浏览次数:2693
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Participating in sports is worthwhile only when you win something.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

是否是只有你赢得了比赛才说明参与运动是有价值的。你的看法是?给出具体的原因。

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For average individuals, the process of participating in sports reflects the value of ourselves and sports. On one hand, people need sports in the sake of exercise, relaxation, and finally building our body up. During the process, it is inevitable that someone win or someone loss. On the other hand, only for the goal of win would make distorted mindset. It is usual that in our daily life, one would want to win regardless of any method involved hurting someone. That is rather terrible, which has been already violate the principle of competition. Nowadays, the increasing number of people attach more importance on self-improvement, which could be realized by the means of sporting, gaming, and reading. Normally, society interaction would involve competitions, from which one could reach a higher goal, no matter that he win or loss. Athletes perfectly exemplify this principle. Racing with others, practicing again and again, for the sake for future success, an athlete would have had to reach his own limitation, no matter that the game win or loss. This also ring for us that it is worthwhile that one in his best. However, with the rapid development of society, people gradually become realism, for who only win can satisfy. Although, in some case, win means a lot for us, it is not always ring true. The result could be devastating if everyone only in the thought of win. They would become ruthless and merciless, as just like a group of machine competes with others, only winner can stay here, the loss one go back home. What a terrible picture, these would lead us losing humanity and become an relentless animal. On my opinion, this not only violate the nature of education, also not a result that everyone want to. All in all, no matter what the result of games, every competitor deserve and worth. Perhaps, one may have to face a number of failure in the whole life, but gradually, the time of reward will come. And what should bear in mind is that the process of whole life is valuable.

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