2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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The table from Bureau of Labor Statistics ,Current Population Survey shows the relationship between education and unemployment rate and earning. The table directly presents that the average of the unemployment rate in 2011 was 7.6%, the median weekly earning in 2011 $797. From the table , we can learn that when you owner a higher education background , you may get median weekly earnings and has less chances of losing job.