题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
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man and computer nowadays,with the development of the science and technology,computer has come into more and more families.as a new electronic product,it plays a important role in our life,it is popular with people around the world,especially the young. computer has changed our life.it makes our life more colorful,more easier.for example,we can watch movies ,make friends ,chat with our relatives or friends on the internet.and also,if we want to buy something,we need not go out,we can buy on the internet;when there is a lot of number to be caculated,we can use computer ,it is so easy.in this point,we can say that computer has made our life easier. But in the other hand,if we don't make good use of it,sometimes it will bring some problems to man.some people use computer to spread rumors everywhere and cheat.we should see everything carefully. in a world,computer has bring a lot of convenience to man,if we can make good use of it,it will be man's good helper,good friend.