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2012年7月28日雅思大作文真题:艺术是否该获得政府资金支持

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:31浏览次数:1543
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题目要求:

Arts (painting and music) does not directly improve people's life, so government should spend money on other important areas. Do you agree or disagree?

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第一段:引入话题,艺术是否该获得政府资金支持

第二段:社会服务当然可以明显地提高人民的生活水平,如教育,医疗,环境或基础建设。但是这些并不会增加人民的幸福感受

第三段:人民需要艺术,因为:艺术相关人们的情感和价值观,这是人们行为的核心部分;艺术培养人的创造和创新能力;艺术是娱乐休闲方式,艺术是感情和精力释放的安全方式,艺术促进不同文化和民族间的理解

第四段:政府应该既投资社会基础服务,也投资艺术。这样才能创造一个健康有生机的社会


词汇拓展:

underestimate 低估

emphasize 强调

boom = prosper繁荣

Tackle 解决

quantify 量化

empower 使人增强力量

intangible 抽象的

not necessarily 不一定

solely = only 仅仅

inspire 激励

excel 出众

make the best of 充分利用

robust 有力量的

enhance 增强

channel 引导

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With the development of the society , more and more citizens not only asking for sufficient-material life, but also mental needs.Some people claim that governments should spend more money on art aspects. On the contrary, critics are convinced that there are many other aspects need funding, instead of arts. Personally speaking , I hold the view that governments should spend money on other important areas. Funding arts areas does have its benefits .First of all ,the more arts a city has, the more travelers will visit. From this perspective ,developing arts could inspire local tourism and economy. secondly, arts could be an energy booster for citizens who crazy about arts , which are likely to enhance their productivity. As is known to us , keeping an enthusiastic attitude towards life is likely to be aspirant.So funding in arts does have goodness. However, there are many other aspects should be considerate. Firstly, there are many people do not even have a chance to get education.If they lack of the ability of reading, and appreciating ,how could this kind of people get touched with arts.If they lack of the fundamental materials, how could they pursue the enjoyment of arts. Secondly, the medicine systems is also a proviral field which needs endless funding. Many people are suffering from disease and disability, they could not even have a normal life. It is obvious that personal healthy problems are far more vital than pursuing arts. In addition, the fundamental facilities are another momentous aspects which needs government fund.The citizens's happiness tends to be enhanced by sufficient facilities. Fundamental facilities always are hailed as he key to improve the well-being of citizens. Above all , it could be concluded that although funding arts has some benefits, spending money on other pivotal areas has more meaningful , visible, and indispensable advantages. So I hold the view that governments should spend money on other important areas.

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