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2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:58浏览次数:7115
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题目要求:

Today,the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?

题目讲解:

报告类题目,难度不大,思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。

第一段:开头

第二段:原因——环境污染,健康问题,工作压力

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第四段:结尾

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People think that nowadays the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. That is a real feeling to most of us. In my opinion, there are two main reasons cause this. Firstly, because more and more people going to large cities for work, the environment have become poorer than before. For instance, the number of car are increasing in the cities in the past few years, as many people become rich, and can afford the expense. In this case, much more gas is released, and air quality is poorer for sure. Secondly, poor environment may cause bad health. Many people, especially the commuters,who go to office by public transportation, may have sub-healthy problem. They work get up early, and usually work overtime. In order to solve this problem, I sum up two solutions. First of all, I suggest government should pay more attention to the environment. They can plant more green tree around the city. What's more, they should develop more green industries, and decease some factories which cause pollution, such as dying factory. Finally, government should build more public sporting equipment for people, so that they will have change to do more sport and relax themselves. So we can do something to change the life quality in big cities, and make them better and healthier.

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