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雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

发布时间:2013-05-15 12:07浏览次数:10486
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Nowadays it is more convenient and easier for people to travel to other countries, is it development a positive or negative effect?

雅思写作主题:出国旅游的利弊,字数在300字以内。

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Today, more and more people choose to other countries ,which it is convenient and easier. For one hand, it's has a positive effort. Firstly, it's a good way that we can open our horizons that can increase our knowledges of other countries' history and cultures. Secdonly , to meet more foreigns and have a conservations with them, which will help us build a good friendship. For other hand, it's also having a negative influence on people's lives. The difference of nations may cause some contradictories, and lead to taking place some unhappiness. In addition, when we are in trouble, we will feel lonely and on friends in our bodies. All in all, it is uncertainty to travel to other countries.

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