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托福独立写作模拟题:关于金钱

发布时间:2013-05-15 12:16浏览次数:1389
要求:
Directions: The independent essay usually asks for your opinion about a familiar topic. You will have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your response. Typically, a good essay for the independent topic will require that you write 300–350 words.

Question: Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each viewpoint and take a stand. Give specific reasons for your position.

题目讲解
本题要求考生通过定位,概括和分类仔细审题,就某个问题写一篇感想,或就一个事件进行阐述,解释以及论证自己的观点,列出提纲明确主题并围绕主题来写作和修改文章。
观点提示
1、 大量的钱可以使我们过上更舒适的生活。
2、 金钱只是物质交换的工具,满足舒适的生活已经足够。

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Generally speaking, there are two main stands in viewing money. The first one is that it is very important to make large amount of money. As a matter of fact, taking an significant part in people's daily life, money can make people living in well-built houses, enjoying modern facilities used in an multi-functional way, and last but not least having the accessibility to anything them want. The second one is that it is acceptable for certain people to be satisfied with a comfortable living. It is said that happiness of life is depend on the way you see the world, not the way you earn money to accommodate your extra need for luxury. You see the world with your mind and retrospect yourself when you find there is a fault in your recent works and actions. As for me, i would like to take the second stand for the flowing reasons below. First of all, it is quiet enough for individuals and families to have a fair amount of money for comfortable living because of the idea of money as being a tool of exchanging living materials is rooted in their minds. Second, sometimes the pursuit of money might blind one's eyes therefore he cannot see the world's nature. Last, one's life is limited while the amount of money is limitless there for he should try his best to make his limited life valuable and try not to spend much time on making money.

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