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2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:48浏览次数:2986
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题目 The Way to Success
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1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes

2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success

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With no doubt, everyone longs for finishing the way to success because it can bring a serious of advantages for us. Fortuneately, there are more people than before having known the direct way to success. To begin with, a steady heart is the eternal and universal topic for getting the success,we should do our best to start everything rather than only gaining the success.Furthermore,there are three factors to finish the goal,for instant,we need to imporve ourselves and learn more things,the most useful thing is instanting,water made the stone have a carve. Eventually,the way to success is not easy,it is a genuine dangerous way to everybody,you need to fight with yourself. On the whole,there is still along way for us to eliminate successand mark our life more comfortable.Hope you can accomplish your dream soon.

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