回复:Smith回复自己将于近日回国处理公司要事,不能前往,表示歉意。
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Dear Mr.Wang June.5th Firstly,I am really glad that you inviting me to your son's 1 year-old birthday party.And I would love to go on that day,but that time I have to go back my country to handle something urgency.When I am back, I will visit you to see your son and give my sincerely wishes to him. Please forgive me ,my dear friend. Yours, Smith.