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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11169
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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As we all know,mobile phone is very popular in our daily life.In our daily life,sometimes we can use WeChat to pay some money,We can pay by mobile phone on the street. When you don't want to go out, you can also shop and order food through your mobile phone. Moreover, mobile phones can also be used as learning tools in a certain period of time; they can also be used as entertainment when they are in a bad mood or bored. In short, mobile phones are everywhere in our life, and we can't leave them. On the other hand,Overuse of mobile phones will also bring many disadvantages, one of which is that it will cause vision loss and eye damage; the other is that it will make people addicted to mobile phones, but ignore the communication with the outside world, which will have a certain impact on interpersonal relations; finally, some people with bad thoughts will use mobile phones to do bad things. In short, overuse of mobile phones has many disadvantages. In any case, use the mobile phone correctly and make good use of it.

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