2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

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Creating a Green Campus I want to point out in this passage a problem that calls for prompt solution.No matter whether people have realized it or not,creating a green campus.I am glad to see that more and more people come to pay attention to the problem. Creating a green campus is not the green environment.In fact,a green campus is that a comfortable place which can provide a good learning environment.When you entered to the campus,you feel very pleasant. To be creating a green campus,we should protect the environment and protect trees and grasses in our school.Don't throw rubbish here and there..As well,we should speak of civilization.