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Recently,there are lots of students crazy about getting certificates,the phonephone is neurotically debated. Different people hold the different views on the issue. Why are the students so hunger to have certificates? Some think certificates will be the key to open their future,the certificates will show their abilities to the HR,and it maybe easier to get a better job.And some students take the attitude that it is a kind of challenge for them to get various certificates. However,in my opinion,I do think there is no point of trying hard to get many certificates,one person'ability should not just check out from those stuffs,but the true really actions to let the HR know you are the person they want to get.