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高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:20浏览次数:22844
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某英文杂志新设“我的家乡”专栏向读者征文,请按下面提供的要点写一篇100个词左右的短文,介绍你的家乡过去的情况和现在的变化,向该杂志投稿。短文标题已给出。
过去:家乡小镇绿树环抱;小河清清鱼儿嬉戏;房屋简陋 街道狭窄;人们劳作生活清贫;现在:高楼大厦厂店林立;大小车辆驰骋街头;工业发展环境恶化;树木减少鱼儿消失;治理污染当务之急。
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There is a place that always reminds me that I belong to her--my hometown. As far as i can memorize , surrounded by green woods ,my hometown used to sit in the center of the woods and a stream went throw it quietly, where you could see various fishes swam in it freely . On the both sides of the narrow streets were our cottages. People there lived a poorly off but happy life.Time flies ! With the development of our economy ,The little cottages have been replaced by tall buildings and large factories. All kinds of vehicles crowd in the streets, where traffic jams are a common phenomenon. Our environment has sacrificed so much for the development of industry .The green woods is being cut down ,worse still ,the fish in the stream could only be seen in my memory. I do hope that our government could do something to protect our threatened mother nature .

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