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I have many friends. some of them are boys and the others are girls.i usually play with my boy friends.most of them are fanny. Yang is one of my friends,he is fanny.He has girl friend.They plan to marry after a few months.Yang is one of my high school students too.We know each other since that time. We both like play basketball,and we offen played basketball together that time. I hope we can be friends forever.