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2007年12月英语六级作文真题:Digital Age

发布时间:2013-05-18 00:29浏览次数:1688
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题目 Digital Age
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1.如今,数字化产品越来越多,如…
2.使用数字化产品对于人们学习工作和生活的影响
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
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作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

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with the developing of the society, more and more digital products have appeared.and now , we are getting in a digital age. nowadays , a amount of digital products meeting our daily life. for example , the TV, computer, phone and the ipad. many people would across these digital products to acquire the information which with the time going and to know the most newest news in our surroundings . to use these digital products, it can say that it have a great change in our society. with these digital products, people would have a great convenient to work ,study or to living. people make use it that can acquire a great deal of information, and make friends ,talk with others , even to listen the music , collect news and so on. it have taken place a great change in our society.

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