作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
with the developing of the society, more and more digital products have appeared.and now , we are getting in a digital age. nowadays , a amount of digital products meeting our daily life. for example , the TV, computer, phone and the ipad. many people would across these digital products to acquire the information which with the time going and to know the most newest news in our surroundings . to use these digital products, it can say that it have a great change in our society. with these digital products, people would have a great convenient to work ,study or to living. people make use it that can acquire a great deal of information, and make friends ,talk with others , even to listen the music , collect news and so on. it have taken place a great change in our society.