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托福独立写作模拟题:关于互联网

发布时间:2013-05-16 14:26浏览次数:632
要求:
Directions: The independent essay usually asks for your opinion about a familiar topic. You will have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your response. Typically, a good essay for the independent topic will require that you write 300–350 words.
Question: Advances in transportation and communication like the airplane and the telephone have changed the way that nations interact with each other in a global society. Choose another technological innovation that you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.
题目讲解
本题要求考生通过定位,概括和分类仔细审题,就某个问题写一篇感想,或就一个事件进行阐述,解释以及论证自己的观点,列出提纲明确主题并围绕主题来写作和修改文章
观点提示
1、 提出因特网改变了人们购物的方式来强调网络购物的便捷。
2、 补充因特网另外还有改变了人群交流的方式来阐述在线交流的广泛。
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A lack of Independent thinking As the compulsory education of nine years continued many years the literary capacity is capitalized by considerable people however we must admit there is lack of independent thinking’s schooling,especially in the internet. It was the best of times. It was the worst of times.In terms of visibility,an amount of news appeared the internet without adequate check so fast speared speed that some fake information was speared in the streaming media without scientific basis. On the invisible part, fake news can’t attract people to think whatever the interesting news of the unknown information. If we lack of independently thinking Activity,we would miss the chance of innovation of pursuing the truth. As much as we know, hundreds years ago,there was an individual who named Galileo fighting with the truism of famous people, gravity assisting him to tell the true thing. Of course we need an advanced law to adopt the anonymous cyber-port since there are many false world with the benefit-oriented to confused people’s brian ,for instance ,the virtual articles in Moments in WeChat, were repost by relative,which are easy to clarify to the stereotype or basic of some science things. However, some people just insist that they can receive and understand. Psychological research shows that the 3 main parts of human weaknesses are lust, emotion, and ignorance which is the most straightforward to modify. The consolidated agreement on eduction is the most important thing in the whole society.More education people be given,the more ignorant will be undermining. This is an unpredictable situation that we are going through enormous news through the smart phone and invisible network which help us enter a more highly technological society. We can obtain information about the every corner of the world,the speedy transfer of information carrying the two sides of a coin, so it is inevitable to spend a certain period to coordinate the high speed information and the low education level.

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