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2010年专四作文真题:学生雇佣清洁工

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:48浏览次数:5275
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题目 Should College Student Hire Cleaners?
说明 It was recently reported in a newspaper that six students who shared a dorm at a local university hired a cleaner to do laundry and cleaning once a week. And each of them paid her 60 Yuan a month. This has lead to a heated debate as to whether college students should hire cleaners. Should College Student Hire Cleaners?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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There was a report that six students hired a cleaner to do laundry and clean once a week. This phenomenon gives rise to a grave discussion about whether hiring a cleaner for students in the university is necessary. On the one hand, some supporters stick to the point that they should hire a cleaner. In brief, they claim that studying is high on students' list of life, so there is no need for them to do any housework that is not relevant to studying. Furthermore, a professional cleaner can definitely offer students a tidy and clean environment, which will urge them to study more efficiently. On the other hand, as for opponents, college students should not make any excuses for their laziness. At the same time, for those students who do not have financial resources, it will surely be a large sum of money for their parents. As far as I am concerned, hiring a cleaner in the university for cleaning undoubtedly screws up one's life. I am going to elaborate on this point the following: As for students in the university, doing laundry and cleaning can just take a fraction of time and develop the skill of being independent. Meanwhile, it is an excellent way for students to relax while studying extremely hard.

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