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高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:20浏览次数:22771
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某英文杂志新设“我的家乡”专栏向读者征文,请按下面提供的要点写一篇100个词左右的短文,介绍你的家乡过去的情况和现在的变化,向该杂志投稿。短文标题已给出。
过去:家乡小镇绿树环抱;小河清清鱼儿嬉戏;房屋简陋 街道狭窄;人们劳作生活清贫;现在:高楼大厦厂店林立;大小车辆驰骋街头;工业发展环境恶化;树木减少鱼儿消失;治理污染当务之急。
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My hometown was so beautiful there was a lot of trees and clean air. I clearly remember that we spent many good memories in my childhood, it made me keep the most profound impression in my life.i was born in the countryside, and my parents all are farmers, I want to express my feelings.whin four seasons in a year I favorite season is in summer Because there were so many trees covered burning the sun for us, In summer my parents have to harvest their fruits of the labor and reap wheat in the middle of June per year,25years ago we did have more advanced mechanical equipment, so we have to use the sickle to receive it I was tired of using the clumsy tools because it was so slow for us when I saw my parents always dropped swears from their head I was very so sad I just hope I can do more things for them.this was one of something kept in my memories. Twenty years passed, our country has evenly considerable changes in agriculture. We can use modern mechanical equipment for all of the farmers who get more comfortable and convenient.

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