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雅思TASK2小作文模拟题:电脑使用 Computer Use

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Some teenagers spend a lot of time playing computer games and this can cause both social and health problems for them. What are some of the problems caused by playing computer games?

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Currently, a discussion is taking place in general public, that is, whether it is beneficial for teenagers spend a lot of time playing computer games. Some social searchers think this cause both social and health problems for them.Personally, i think this remark is justifed, as can be seen in the following paragraphs. In my view, it threats to do more harm than good in playing computer games, i can share my experence of chinese children,especially in primary and middle students.For one thing,teenagers take up a lot of time playing computer, waste of amount time for they should have spent on their academic study.For another thing, they playing computer all day,staying up late and overnight, upside down, the sub-healthy problems will come, for instance headache, dizziness.It is rarely possible for them to have a solid physical health, let alone complete their work or study on time and acheive their aim of life. Some people might think computer games can bring a good way for teenagers to relaxion and entertainment.It seems contain a ture element, but ignore the other side of it:One of them is teenagers are independent and childish,they cannot control theirself, it is indipensable for their parents require them.Besides, some insecurical thing is happend on computer frequency, for instance some bad man use the computer game to meet teenagers in real world. To sum up, despite some benefits, the influence of computer games in teenagers is negitive and careful.This statement might be traditional but it is realistic and rational in current social setting.

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