2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；作者应适量增加从句的使用量。

Now in the society,in many fields in people's life more and more rely on the computer,such as office,education, traffic system, electric power system,in the network search for information etc. Computer is like a partner in our life,bring us life convenient. At the same time it also brings a lot of social problems,just like internet crime and teens delay learning caused by deeply addictive in network game. So computer brings us both side good and bed.As parents we should guide the child correct and effective to use the computer.