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2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:58浏览次数:7113
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Today,the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?

题目讲解:

报告类题目,难度不大,思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。

第一段:开头

第二段:原因——环境污染,健康问题,工作压力

第三段:解决——绿色科技+绿化,健康意识+运动设施,学会自我减压

第四段:结尾

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Nowadays, with the modern technology developing rapidly, human's life has become more and more convenient, but at the same time, there are some problems coming up. These problems are doing damage to our health. One of the most severe problems is pollution, which includes many kinds of pollution, such as air pollution, water pollution. Air pollution can influence human's respiratory system. Water pollution is also close to our daily life and can make human get sick because of pollutde water. Secondly, people especially young people who have stepped in their working position, are facing much more presure, these presure may come from thier workmates, or their parents. if they can not handle them properly, these presure will influence their life, for example, some may have insomnia.Thirdly, more and more people become quite busy with their work, sitting in front of the computers for a day, they do not have spare time to do some exersice, therefore, some health problems come out. With some many negative factors that cause the decreasing of the quality of our life, measures must be done. In term of pollution, human should pay more attention to green science and technology, as well as planting green plants to save the ecological enviorment.For those who are under heavy presure, they should learn to self relief, build their own hobbies and have some entertainments after work. To maintain our health, we are required to develop habit of doing exercise, even if we are busy with our work or study, exercise should be as same important as work or study. As the human society progressing, the quality of large cities is worsen, thses problems are of great importance, the progress of human society should not at the cost of human's health and enviorment.

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