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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11165
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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As we all know,cellphone is almost the most important thing in the daily life for us. When we go out , we can see almost all of people had mobile phones.Someone use cellphone to learn some new things.Someone use cellphone for watching movies. And moblie phones can be used to play games.In our country,many parents think play games on cellphone is harmful to childrens' eyes and bodys.And it's no benefit for their study.So I think students should spend less time on phones.Moreover,there are so many phubbers in the street,they always look at their moblie phones and not look where they're going.This has led to a lot of traffic accidents.Therefore,for our owm safety,we should reduce the use of cellphones on the road.

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