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in china's history, to willing others who in trouble is a good deed and it is a great traditional virtue.helping others can have a good mood and it is very happy.it would takes you a feeling with happiness. but it have a conflict between about that if it should expect a reward when one doing a good deed.some people keep the opinion that it should expect the reward.however , nobody have the obligation to helping others. to do a good deed, it completely depend on personal. helpers to expect the reward is formal. and it can would have a great encouragement for helpers. however, other people thinks that it is not necessary reward the helpers. in our china, helping others is virtue. it should not depend on rewards. people should learn from the LeiFeng, who is willing help others and without any rewards. as far as i am concerned, it can reward others in suitable. in most time , it should not depend on rewards .helping others is a good virtue. everyone should have a habit of willing help others , and this process, we would acquire happiness.
