Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.
1.有些大学校园浪费现象日益严重
2.浪费的危害
3.杜绝浪费, 从我做起
作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;文章词汇表达不够丰富,在拼写方面也要继续努力;请注意分段。
Nowadays,the situtation of waste on campus is more and more severly.And i think it is not good for our health.Therefore, we need to take some actions to reduce this phenonment.And for the sake of us, we should do our best to deal with it.Today, is a good day.rections: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.
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