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2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:37浏览次数:9384
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题目 My views on Online Shopping
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1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚  
2. 网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题 
3. 我的建议 
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Nowadays the more and more people like Online Shopping ,it comes to a fashion because the development of Interent. Online Shopping have many adverventages . First of all,Online Shopping is cheper ,when you buy somethings you can consume less money then common shopping. what's more,Online Shopping is convenient ,it don't you go out you can shopping by cellphone. On the contrary, Online Shopping also have many disadverventages.First of all Online Shopping needs more time when you get the things you bought .What's more 网络购物有可能会买到假货或者不好的货。the last ,when you buy shoes or 衣服 you can't try to dress up it ,so it possibly unfit you. As far as I'm concered, Online Shopping is better than 实体店购物。By Online Shopping you can save much money .一般情况来讲,the possibility is very small of 买到假货。If you know your size of shoes and 衣服,you can buy them online.

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