作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。
Now many people are bound up in a series of certificate examinations. For example, some join in examinations of English and the others are attending the examinations of the computer. As we all know the number of whom attending the certificate examinations is increasing year by year. Everyone has their own reasons about the certificate examinations. Some people think they will get more chances of getting jobs that they want if they acquire the relevant certificates. However some others want to prove their own abilities by the examinations. In my opinion, we should attend the relevant certificate examinations. On the one hand, we can know our own real abilities and disadvantages by the examinations, and it can make us study more hard. On the other hand, we need the certificate if we hope to get a more professional job that we want as for the accounting, the lawyer. So I support the view that people should attend the relevant certificate examinations. .