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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36740
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用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
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I have a good friend. His name is Yu. We started to know each other when we studied in the same class in high school. Up to now we've been known each other for 25 years. There were not too much special things happened between us. However, his present in my hardest time made me very appreciative and I should never forget his help to cheer me up. He told me his past experience about being fired by several different companies. He talked about his feeling and frustration during unemployment. And he gave me some advice and comments about answering interviewers questions. He tried his best to remove my stress about the future. A friend in need is a friend indeed. That's why I regard him as my good friend.

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