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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11165
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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Nowadays,almost everyone of us has had a phone,even the children.Actually,the phone has been normal in our life and it also make our life become more convenient,but there are also some concequences it takes to us. As a matter of fact, I do think we depend on the phone too much.We use the phone to communicate with our families and friends,thoght they just sit with us.We use the phone to play games ,thought our eyes have been hurt because of this.We use the phone to make friends with strangers ,thought maybe we even don't know our nerhborhood's name.For a long time,we all think the phone is good for us.But now ,don't you realize that the phone has make our life miserable?We are more afraid of talking with others,more addicted to a fake world.It's a big problem! So,now,please put off you phone!Just fight with our phone control!I beleive our life will become better with less useing of the phone.

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