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字数：300 满分：100分
从句数量稍显不足，注意增加从句和复杂句的使用；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Be Careful with Our Money With the development of the level of the objective life, some children are spoiled by their parents, comparing with other students in clothes, houses and other aparts. In my opinion, we students should be careful with our money. Firstly, in this age, we should pay our attention on our study. Secondly, most of us just have no jobs to earn money, what we consume are all given by our parents. They work hard to afford our tuition fee and living expenses. As children, we should share the burden with them. Thirdly, it is our tradition to save money, cosume properly. We should not compare in living expenses, but our study and ability. All in all, as youth, we should develop a good living habit, build a correct value.
