语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;句式灵活多变,再加强从句的使用会更棒;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;请注意分段。
In recent years,it has comes up a situation that there is a ignorance between nowadays students . Mostly ,they give their votes to English study instead of Chinese study as they think that the latter is the one which is their tongue and they are specialized in As the second native langue ,English speaking study has been being a mainstream of our daily life for us who has different sorts of occupations and different stages of age . In our personal sense,with the improvement of morden science and the globlism of the world ,English is more and more with vital importance for us ,especially the young. B, .As my vote ,i should give out it to both of them ,the following state will prove my choice .