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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11045
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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People are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see. The mobile phone is becoming more and more popular,which has aroused a long-term discussion among the public. form my perspective.whether use mobile phone depends on the need of different individuals. Quite a few elements can account my perspective.On one hand,there is no doubt that mobile phone could be convenient and efficient when we go shopping where at the market that can help we face-to-face paying.on other hand mobile phone after all is no-good for child,because it can harm eye and make down worker's work efficient . As a result.just as a coin has tow sides that mobile phone exception.that is to say,we should distinguish it is good from bad .only in this way we can make mobile phone exert a postive effect on our life and future job.

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