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2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:58浏览次数:7111
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题目要求:

Today,the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?

题目讲解:

报告类题目,难度不大,思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。

第一段:开头

第二段:原因——环境污染,健康问题,工作压力

第三段:解决——绿色科技+绿化,健康意识+运动设施,学会自我减压

第四段:结尾

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In mordern days, we receive lots of news reported that the quality of life in large cities decrease much . We contribute to the caused as follows: Firstly, people have lots of pressure both in lives and works , the youth should study hard to win a good job and after that they must pay for marriage and houses as well as cars,plus even later their kids eduation fees, while sometimes they are overstudied or overworked but achieved less. Secondly, pollution problem is also one of the factors to destroy our health,such as air pollution,water pollution etc ,besides these,unhealthy foods( too oil and too fatty foods) cause a lot of disease such as high blood pressure ,cancer etc. Then how to solve these problem? On the one hand,our goverment should take measure to add the green(plant more trees and grasses) and sports fetilites in our cities to beautify our environment and purify the air. On the other hand,we should strengthen our health conciousness to do more sports and outdoor activities that makes us more stronger. What's more, to individually,we should learn to decrease our pressure through medicating and off-working for a while to relax. To sum up ,we should regulate ourselves to adap to the society developing and positively doing studies and work, and then attend to all varies of activities to make us stonger, through these we could live a better life in mordern stages.

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