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2015年高考作文优秀范文:登山活动

发布时间:2015-09-30 16:35浏览次数:2378
要求:
  星光中学(Xing Guang High School)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者,请写一篇短文,报道此次活动。内容包括:
  1. 时间与地点:4月10日,大青山(Daqing Mountain);
  2. 活动的过程;
  3. 你对于这次活动的评论。
  注意: 1. 词数120左右。
  2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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  In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it。   It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Moutain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing, and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in the sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy。   The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, but it also promoted friendship among us. What a wonderful time!

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