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In my opinion,i do think financial disparity affects friendship a lot,no matter how you get along well with eathother ,or how matual you are.Even you have a good sense of friendship,it does influence you and your friends potentially. Friendship,I think,is a combiation of different life and dreams and values theory,you can learn each other's experience and thoughts,and the same time ,you can tell your friends how you think about it,and you may share them your own experience similar to theirs.However,different economic capbility leads to different life styles,diverse thoughts.You might not agree with the way and condition other person lives with all their lifes.There could be many differences bewteen you that you cann't standwith,for example,he thinks he should go home for farm workings in the weekend,but you want him together with you to play basketball ,any way ,you can ignore the point once or twice,i don't think you could admit you two have different life and can't share and merge . So,that's the common situation.I don't doubt that some kind of friendship can exist and transcend treasure and poor,They may be used to their friends' life and adapt to live with and handle with friendship between them,let's just pray for them having eternal friendship.