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小学三年级英语作文:When I grow up

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:54浏览次数:2806
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用英语描述下自己长大后的理想,字数在100字以内。
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Hello everyone!Today i will talk about the future with you.I grew up in a very poor family. At that time, I hoped that I could have the money to buy snacks like others.In the days when I have money, I will be able to accomplish many things I want to accomplish, which is an unprecedented happiness.Change money into a villa and give elderly relatives a warm home.When you have money, you can also provide them with enough pension and medical care.

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