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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11030
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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On the Overuse of the Mobile Phone As is shown in the picture, having a mobile phone in hand and at the ready is the default mode while walking on the streets. This cartoon symbolically reveals that people nowadays, especially young people, are growing increasingly dependent on their mobile phones. It is true that the mobile phone has brought great convenience to people's lives. 1. However, just as is illustrated in the picture, its overuse may lead to several bad consequences. Io begins with, there is evidence that long-term exposure to electromagnetic radiation may trigger many health problems, such as insomnia, headaches, and even cancers. 2. In addition, when people immerse themselves in their mobile phones, they tend to pay less attention to their surroundings, posing an immediate threat to their life, health, and property. Last but not least, excessive use of mobile phones means much less chance of face-to-face interactions with the people who populate their real lives. In conclusion, while mobile phones have contributed a lot to make our life more convenient, we should use them appropriately and rationally.

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