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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
Dear Sir or Madam, I saw your new product of No. 5670 at the fair held in New York from Dec. 15th to 22nd. I was very interested in it. Please kindly offer us a price list and instruction. Thank you for your attention and we are expecting to establish business relationship with you. We are looking forward to your early reply! Yours sincerely, Hu Bin
