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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
可适当增加从句的使用；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细；文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑，结构缺少组织；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。
Dear Mr. and Ma'am, This is Hubin from China. I'm writing to you for your new product--No.5670. I was attracted by it at the exhibition held in New York from December 15 to 22. We seek your help to offer us this product's price list and instruction. Because we need it to provide our company management to discuss whether the product meets China market. We are expecting to estabilsh businiess realtionship with you so much. We are looking forward to your early reply. Thank you very much. sincerely yours Hubin
