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Recently, more and more people are addicted in examing for certificate. The main reason is that employees are required to have many certificates. And more certificates means a better chance to be employed or a better position. There are also some people just want to improve their skills. Recent occasion force people on certificate craze. There is no doublt that certificate can increase the chance of promotion. In my view, certificate can not always be concerned with skill. And some people just know how to get heigh scroce, but don't know how to use it in daily work. So we should pay more attention on improving skills rather than certificate craze. If you have strong ability, you can also be promoted.
