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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12598
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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Nowadays, we live in a world with rapid development of science and technology. It makes our life more convenient and more comfortable. We can use the robots to help us doing the housework, we can access the internet to look for some useful informations. Indeed, the internet makes great convenience when we connect with our family and friends. But, the internet also bring a lot of problems that couldn't be ignored. The followings are some of my points. Many people are afraid of the cyberattacks. In my opinion, cyberattacks is insufficient now, and we should make it more and more consummate. We often trapped into information leakage. Also, the internet is a big information collecting field. We can hardly distinguish the benifit information and the harmful information. The eldly people and teenagers may misled by those harmful informations. Some time they lost their money or something valuable. The internet is attacked, it is the reason why somebody addicted to the internet and care about nothing. In a word, we have to take action to clean up the environment of the internet. Tirst of all, the relevant departments should take theirs responsibility. They should delete the website with harmful information and alert the people who spread it. The most important thing is to catch those criminal rings on the internet. Secondly, we should step up publicity about the problem of cyberattacks. Last but not least, protecting cyberattacks should be engraved on everyone's mind.

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