2013年5月25日雅思大作文真题TASK2附范文:政府资金支持艺术

学术词汇比较灵活，但文中拼写错误稍多；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；可以适当增加副词的使用。

It's convetrovival about the support for artists. Some people think that artists are abstraction and it's costly to protect or develop it and it doesn't make sense. should gvoernment support artists rather than other things ? Artiscts is the persure of spirtis , compared with teconoligy ,madicine ,education , it means much more to human races . Articst is the magic , the express of emotion and thoughts .It's creatvie and stir ours brains up. You may trace the history ,the developed society is alwayws companied by active artists .it refelct the local couterls ,features . it's the bond of a nation and the communication tool of conturies . In conclusion ,i think it's very important to supportt the artists to create a healthy ,civil society .